Basics
Active voice
You should (almost) always write in the active voice. Avoid passive voice.
In active voice, the subject of the sentence does the action. In passive voice, the subject of the sentence has the action done to it.
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Tip
Words like “was” and “by” may indicate that you’re writing in passive voice. Scan for these words and rework sentences where they appear.
One exception is when you want to specifically emphasize the action over the subject. In some cases, this is fine.
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Passive voice
To tell if you’re using the passive voice, look out for:
- When the object comes before the subject (“the item was purchased by the customer”)
- Past tense verbs (“was added,” “was created,” and so on)
- Forms of the verb “to be” (“was,” “is,” “were,” and so on)
You should almost always write in the active voice, but here’s when to use the passive voice:
- To avoid referring to yourself or Shopware
- To make it clear that you didn’t personally take an action or make a decision
- If the object (thing being done) is more important than the subject (person doing the thing)
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